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[LadyIfe]

This is seriously my first time promoting something of mine. So bare with me.

Author: LadyIfe
Title: Innocence of the Morning Star
Summary: 13 year old, Kiram, sets herself out on a path of discovering herself, through good and bad to Hell and back. Going through things most girls her age wouldn't dare to step, as she explores her developing body and her new found sexual desires. From friends, family, men, and lovers; she explores the darkest places this world has to offer her.
Feedback: I guess a little critique would help, I would like to know if I should keep it from her POV or switch it to the authors(me). I know I make grammar mistakes so pointing them out would help.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: N/A( but if you seen my other story then you know there's gonna be a Kiram/Michael and Kiram/Stanley)
Warnings: Abortion, Angst, CR, H/C, Minor2, Oral, Violence, WIP. There's also Solo/F, Fingering, Preg, and a little Voy, Voy.
URL: http://original.adul...hp?no=600104957

Any feedback would help, at this point. I only wrote this on a whim, but I think its worth continuing. Let me know.

Please and Thank you~