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@  Danyealle : (17 May 2012 - 04:10 AM) be well and sleep good!
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@  Danyealle : (17 May 2012 - 04:07 AM) planned to write tonight but keep getting sidetracked with 'things'
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@  Danyealle : (17 May 2012 - 04:00 AM) be well, BW
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Review replies for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness


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#21 Danyealle

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Posted 13 February 2012 - 12:14 PM

@Athenia-Glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon!

@ Reba-thanks for the tip

@Blink-thanks! Bella is going to be some fun!

@Mystra-there aren't many notes for me to work with so I'm not all that certain what I'm going to do with Sirius but he's coming soon, I promise!

@Alexa-Thanks!

@EvilGenius-thanks! I'll take the suggestion under advisement

@Vittani-My beta actually doesn't know HP at all, she's never read the books or seen the movies(she's game for anything so takes on whatever fandom I write in even if she doesn't know about it-gotta love someone willing to do that for you!). As this story is so long and complex, it's very hard to remember what when where in it, expecially, in her case, where you've only read it once(even for just a casual reader. It's slightly different if you write it yourself as you usually can remember certain things or have notes or outlines to work off of). I would adore a second beta to go over things for continuity errors but even finding a beta to do spelling/grammar is quite difficult. Nor am I willing to give up Tenchi for such things. If someone is willing to volunteer for that, I would be all for it. As it is, I'm going through the first version and taking notes on certain things to ensure I have at least a small idea of what went where(as well as loose ends I want to work with and other things that jump out at me). Anyone that wants to try to take it on can contact me through the forum here or various places listed on my profile.

@ILoveWyatt-Glad you're enjoying!

@ryuuta-glad you're enjoying!

@ivy raven-No offense taken and I hope you don't at this... I'm not going to try to adopt Aya's style. To do that, I would throw off, completely what I do with more that just this story, it would affect the way I work with everything I'm in the middle of, something I seriously don't want. While the style is different, I hope you enjoy. There also comes in the factor that each of us percieve characters and situations differently (if we didn't, there wouldn't be such a variety of HP stories out there!) so I'm going with how i percieve such things as I can't get into Aya's head and work with how she did. Hope you're enjoying anyway!

@LeaniaSTL-glad you're enjoying!

@Raven-trust me, what you mention is going to come into play! It's one of the few things I've PMed Aya and asked her about. Just gotta give me time to get there is all!

@Hollzhatter-glad you're enjoying and thanks!

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#22 Danyealle

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 11:48 AM

@Felawred- no, we don't have author's alerts here. But, on my authors page, i have my twitter account and yahoo group. I give update notices on those. Best I can do for you!
@Aelirenn- yeah, my brain is having issues with the name Evan, it keeps going with Lily's maiden name. I'm fixing those as fast as i can find them, Sorry about that!
@Michaelle- Sorry, I don't have a mailing list. You can sign up for Twitter or my Yahoo group. That's how I'm doing it
@Me- glad you're enjoying!
@Rosencrantz- thanks for pointing that out! My beta and I both missed it
@tattooedrory- yes, I focused on the ring because i have something HUGE planned for that in coming chapters. It was also a good jumping off point for me to get a 'feel' for the fic. You'll understand shortly, I promise! Glad you're enjoying it.
@yngoldfogee- Glad you like it. I hope I don't disappoint!
@LeaniaSTL- yes, tons of scheming! And lots more to come. Glad you're enjoying!
@Grinedel- LOL you're review gave me a good chuckle! Glad you like it!
@purrfus- glad to see you here. I hope you like what's to come!
@adoracorazon- yeah, i couldn't let something this good go without an ending if I could help it. Just thankfully Aya was gracious enough to allow me to pick it up!
@unneeded- back plan IS ominous with as bad as Dumbledore is in this story! Lots of twists coming, I promise!
@ryuuta- LOL yeah, poor Snape. He has so much on his plate LMAO. He doesn't need those kinds of unsettling thoughts, does he? LMAO! Voldemort is up to something, I promise! Just gotta wait and see!
@ILoveWyatt- Glad you like it! Hope you enjoy what is to come soon!

I know I don't always get to answers quickly, as I'm usually fairly busy, but I get to your comments and questions as fast as I can, I promise!

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#23 Danyealle

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Posted 23 April 2012 - 05:43 PM

@Skull Bearer- glad you're enjoying!  Just posted the new update today!
@Mawwe- obviously not or it would have a complete tag on it
@KainCrow- yeah, there are lots of possibilities for all of it, trust me!  I've got some sneaky stuff coming in areas you mentioned so keep an eye out :D
@Reess1- thanks!  Glad you're enjoying!

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#24 Danyealle

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Posted 04 May 2012 - 05:58 AM

@Grinedel - Yes, Dumbledore is not a nice being in this one. Glad you're enjoying it! Sorry to disappoint, but no sex scene next chapter, sorry! I have some other things to stuff in before I can put some sex in. It'll come, just not right away.
@Reess1- Glad you're enjoying it!
@evilgenus- Thanks! Yes, we tend to lose sight that Harry, despite his maturity, is a teen with the normal problems he has. And he is taking on a lot right now, pulled in so many directions, so he's entitled to some stress and such to make him human.
@adoracorazon- Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the update!
@LeaniaSTL- All will be explained, I promise! Including how he managed it. Yes, Harry and Draco are getting closer. And, more to come soon, I promise!
@unneeded-In this story, since when is Dumbledore real subtle? LOL. He's backed into a corner so things are getting pushed in a way he normally wouldn't. Promise, more twists and surprises coming soon!
@RAVEN=Glad you enjoyed it!

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